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December 28th, 2002, 03:04 AM
#1
Inactive Member
The room is empty. The occupants have left.
Henri Latour - I'm still hammering away. It's extremely difficult.
Should be posted by Jan 1st.
<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ December 31, 2002 04:05 PM: Message edited by: GREATwarEAGLE ]</font>
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December 28th, 2002, 06:43 PM
#2
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good dialogue, simple idea. Nothing too special. It was interestin to see where it was going, but not that interesting. It read pretty well, but it was mostly dialogue which always reads better than action, aye.
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